Today
1) Working on your papers - 1 hour Write 150 words explaining what you accomplished today as a comment below!
2) Interactive MLA workshop - resources here!
3) Conclusions - Here's a link!
4) Evaluating the prof!
Ashley - What I accomplished today was try to figure out what to write in my paper and try to make it make scene. It's very struggling because I'm trying to let everything flow instead of not trying to make everything all crazy and jumbled up together. Also I am trying to find more sources and try to find quotes that I can use for my paper.
Today I accomplished teaching some of my classmates how to cite certain things for their paper. I also accomplished finding new articles for my research. I even edited my paragraphs to make it more specific.
I have accomplished to write a extra paragraph in the essay. I was able to try and think more and add to my first draft. I was also able to review my research.I would like to reread everything i wrote and make sure it makes sense and proves my point.
Today I found some quotes to use in my paper; in order for all of my paper to go fluently and not jump off topic. I also had some great ideas to write down in my paper. I want to write each paragraph or each topic in a different paper and try to have it flow. I also fixed my sources the right way and take many notes. I found video's to help me write my paper which is great and a big help.
In class today I organized my body paragraphs and I looked up one more idea to put in my paper. I tried cleaning up the paper like fixing the grammar and taking out extra ideas that really didn’t really go with the original idea and point that I’m trying to make. I went back to my articles and quote and made sure everything in my paper is sited or quoted and not plagiarized. I need tried working on my conclusion but I lost my train of thought and went back to reviewing my articles and videos that’s I’m trying to use in the paper.
Today, I was able to edit and add to my introduction. I am not completely confident in my introduction but, I have enhanced it to make it better. I was able to read through my first paragraph and edit it as well. In my first paragraph I was able to sort out my ideas. In sorting out my ideas I was able to create new ideas and a stronger first paragraph. Finishing my first paragraph I went on to my second paragraph and begin comparing the philosopher and neo. I did not finish reading my entire paper because I was busy analyzing each paragraph. I am trying to have at least five body paragraphs in order to make a great conclusion.
Today what I did in class was changing up some of the paragraphs that i already worked on. I changed up some of the sentences. i also came up with some ideas for the next couple of paragraphs for my paper.
I looked my paper back and forth, I tried to check does my support ideas go with my thesis. And I checked about my grammar as much as I can, and I also ask classmate about work cited. I tried to do citation in the right way. And I also add conclusion to my paper.
Today I accomplished citing my resources. I cited about three of them. My class mate Ricardo also tough me how to do so. I've also finished my introduction for my essay. I've also printed quotes from the bible that I will be using in my essay. I finished reading one article and high lighting some important details. I looked up the big words I didn't understand.
I just reviewed my final draft and check my grammar. My sentence are not strong enough so i'm trying to work on the vocabulary. Im confuse with my conclusion and work cited right now.
Today I accomplished a lot of things in my research paper. I organized the paragraph’s because they were all over the place, and didn’t somewhat go in order, the order they were in didn’t make sense so I fixed up the order of the paragraph’s so it went more. I also managed to check for a few minor mistakes I did but didn’t notice when I was writing my research paper. Also I wrote a lot more on some of the paragraph’s that needed more writing in it, and I found more quotes that make my argument stronger.
Today in class i worked in my paper for english getting my final thoughts together to give my paper in. I also worked on my mla format to get better and understand it well.
In class today I worked on my paper more by finding quotes. I also looked for more research as well. today I also learned to do MLA cite for my paper, and I have discovered a new concept of my paper. Today i even looked beyond my research for my topic, this time was very helpful.
Today I had the chance to see how it feels to be a tutor. I was peer-editing an essay of a classmate as well as helping others with their MLA citations.
Ashley -
ReplyDeleteWhat I accomplished today was try to figure out what to write in my paper and try to make it make scene. It's very struggling because I'm trying to let everything flow instead of not trying to make everything all crazy and jumbled up together. Also I am trying to find more sources and try to find quotes that I can use for my paper.
Today I accomplished teaching some of my classmates how to cite certain things for their paper. I also accomplished finding new articles for my research. I even edited my paragraphs to make it more specific.
DeleteI have accomplished to write a extra paragraph in the essay. I was able to try and think more and add to my first draft. I was also able to review my research.I would like to reread everything i wrote and make sure it makes sense and proves my point.
ReplyDeleteToday I found some quotes to use in my paper; in order for all of my paper to go fluently and not jump off topic. I also had some great ideas to write down in my paper. I want to write each paragraph or each topic in a different paper and try to have it flow. I also fixed my sources the right way and take many notes. I found video's to help me write my paper which is great and a big help.
DeleteIn class today I organized my body paragraphs and I looked up one more idea to put in my paper. I tried cleaning up the paper like fixing the grammar and taking out extra ideas that really didn’t really go with the original idea and point that I’m trying to make. I went back to my articles and quote and made sure everything in my paper is sited or quoted and not plagiarized. I need tried working on my conclusion but I lost my train of thought and went back to reviewing my articles and videos that’s I’m trying to use in the paper.
ReplyDeleteToday, I was able to edit and add to my introduction. I am not completely confident in my introduction but, I have enhanced it to make it better. I was able to read through my first paragraph and edit it as well. In my first paragraph I was able to sort out my ideas. In sorting out my ideas I was able to create new ideas and a stronger first paragraph. Finishing my first paragraph I went on to my second paragraph and begin comparing the philosopher and neo. I did not finish reading my entire paper because I was busy analyzing each paragraph. I am trying to have at least five body paragraphs in order to make a great conclusion.
ReplyDeleteToday what I did in class was changing up some of the paragraphs that i already worked on. I changed up some of the sentences. i also came up with some ideas for the next couple of paragraphs for my paper.
ReplyDeleteI looked my paper back and forth, I tried to check does my support ideas go with my thesis. And I checked about my grammar as much as I can, and I also ask classmate about work cited. I tried to do citation in the right way. And I also add conclusion to my paper.
ReplyDeleteToday I accomplished citing my resources. I cited about three of them. My class mate Ricardo also tough me how to do so. I've also finished my introduction for my essay. I've also printed quotes from the bible that I will be using in my essay. I finished reading one article and high lighting some important details. I looked up the big words I didn't understand.
ReplyDeleteI just reviewed my final draft and check my grammar. My sentence are not strong enough so i'm trying to work on the vocabulary. Im confuse with my conclusion and work cited right now.
ReplyDeleteToday I accomplished a lot of things in my research paper. I organized the paragraph’s because they were all over the place, and didn’t somewhat go in order, the order they were in didn’t make sense so I fixed up the order of the paragraph’s so it went more. I also managed to check for a few minor mistakes I did but didn’t notice when I was writing my research paper. Also I wrote a lot more on some of the paragraph’s that needed more writing in it, and I found more quotes that make my argument stronger.
ReplyDeleteToday in class I working on making my introduction paragraph and thesis statement clear and organizing my body paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteToday in class i worked in my paper for english getting my final thoughts together to give my paper in. I also worked on my mla format to get better and understand it well.
ReplyDeleteIn class today I worked on my paper more by finding quotes. I also looked for more research as well. today I also learned to do MLA cite for my paper, and I have discovered a new concept of my paper. Today i even looked beyond my research for my topic, this time was very helpful.
ReplyDeleteToday I had the chance to see how it feels to be a tutor. I was peer-editing an essay of a classmate as well as helping others with their MLA citations.
ReplyDelete